I believe what you published was actually very reasonable.
But, what about this? suppose you added a little content?
I am not saying your information isn't good, but what if you added a post title that grabbed a person's attention? I mean Eyko-Jacomo vom Bahnhof-Zoo is kinda boring.
You should look at Yahoo's home page and see how they create post headlines to
grab people to click. You might add a related video or
a related picture or two to get people excited about what you've written. Just
my opinion, it might make your posts a little livelier. |